I need some critiques/opinions on a song I made. I think I’m gonna call it “(All my friends are dead, I’m) Going Home”
Right now my thoughts are that the middle “Chill and Groove” section is a little sparse. I mean, I’ve introduced all the elements and they’re all jiving well together, it’s just that I think a little variation would do well there, I just don’t know what to do with it.
Also, notice that I’ve touched anything in terms of mastering, i.e. the volume, pan, equalizer or anything, so the actual mix is subpar.
But anyway, here’s more talking. The percussion is supremely basic because I didn’t really want to focus on it. If it’s too repetitive/boring and it’s making you rip your hair out, lemme know and I’ll see what I can come up with.
As for the bass, I think it’s one of the aspects I’m most satisfied with. I realize the chord progression for the song only spans like, 4 notes, and it repeats every measure, but I like slow, meandering, buzzing, bass so much.
The strings were kinda hard to compose because I suck at melodies that don’t sound cheesy.
But oh well, it’s not bad for a first song.